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		<title>By: videofilmmaker</title>
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		<dc:creator>videofilmmaker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Aug 2011 17:14:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Sachin,

Thanks for the kind words. Your options are limited, because the interval must be placed approximately half way through the movie: it cannot be too close to the beginning or the end. I would recommend placing the interval after the midpoint of Act 2, when the attention of the audience is high.

Thanks for following my work!

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Sachin,</p>
<p>Thanks for the kind words. Your options are limited, because the interval must be placed approximately half way through the movie: it cannot be too close to the beginning or the end. I would recommend placing the interval after the midpoint of Act 2, when the attention of the audience is high.</p>
<p>Thanks for following my work!</p>
<p>Ed</p>
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		<title>By: sachin sharma</title>
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		<dc:creator>sachin sharma</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Aug 2011 09:35:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Videofilmmaker, You rock man. Your analysis about hit movies is right, they do follow 3 acts rule. and you are also right about human brain being hard wired for this model. Infact human life itself consist of three acts, you are born at some place(act one), how you live your life(act two) and because of that, how you die(act three).
To put in other words you are child in the beginning(act one) then the young man (act two) then the old man(act three). Keep up the good work bro. all my best wishes with you.
Can you help me with one thing? In our country we have intervals in the movies and  the normal length of the movies are between 2hrs to 2 hrs 20 mins. can you tell me what should the ideal length of the first half of the movie?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Videofilmmaker, You rock man. Your analysis about hit movies is right, they do follow 3 acts rule. and you are also right about human brain being hard wired for this model. Infact human life itself consist of three acts, you are born at some place(act one), how you live your life(act two) and because of that, how you die(act three).<br />
To put in other words you are child in the beginning(act one) then the young man (act two) then the old man(act three). Keep up the good work bro. all my best wishes with you.<br />
Can you help me with one thing? In our country we have intervals in the movies and  the normal length of the movies are between 2hrs to 2 hrs 20 mins. can you tell me what should the ideal length of the first half of the movie?</p>
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		<title>By: videofilmmaker</title>
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		<dc:creator>videofilmmaker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Aug 2011 08:17:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Alison,

My hypothesis is that the three-act structure is intrinsic to the human brain in general, not to the Western mind in particular.

What the other commenters in this thread also ought to understand is that I am an observer, not an activist: I have no personal interest in pushing the three-act structure, but I do have an interest in understanding why it is so fundamentally important in screenplays.

Thanks for commenting!

Ed</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Alison,</p>
<p>My hypothesis is that the three-act structure is intrinsic to the human brain in general, not to the Western mind in particular.</p>
<p>What the other commenters in this thread also ought to understand is that I am an observer, not an activist: I have no personal interest in pushing the three-act structure, but I do have an interest in understanding why it is so fundamentally important in screenplays.</p>
<p>Thanks for commenting!</p>
<p>Ed</p>
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		<title>By: Alison Clement</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alison Clement</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Aug 2011 22:13:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Does the traditional structure of film reflect the human brain or the western brain, Videofilmmaker? Do films from other cultures follow the 3 act pattern? I&#039;m a novelist and interested in the structure of stories, particularly the way we internalize the structure of storytelling. (Assuming the structure is not inherent.) I always figured that one reason Americans have a problem with foreign films (aside from the subtitle thing) is that those films follow a pattern we&#039;re not used to.  When it comes to writing, I know that the traditional story telling structure of the Middle East, for instance, is more layered than ours- like 1001 Nights, stories within stories. Wouldn&#039;t that also be true of films?  I like your idea of the 3 acts representing a model for the human brain&#039;s way of organizing information, to paraphrase you, but don&#039;t different cultures have different storytelling traditions/patterns? 
Thanks for your blog. Interesting.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Does the traditional structure of film reflect the human brain or the western brain, Videofilmmaker? Do films from other cultures follow the 3 act pattern? I&#8217;m a novelist and interested in the structure of stories, particularly the way we internalize the structure of storytelling. (Assuming the structure is not inherent.) I always figured that one reason Americans have a problem with foreign films (aside from the subtitle thing) is that those films follow a pattern we&#8217;re not used to.  When it comes to writing, I know that the traditional story telling structure of the Middle East, for instance, is more layered than ours- like 1001 Nights, stories within stories. Wouldn&#8217;t that also be true of films?  I like your idea of the 3 acts representing a model for the human brain&#8217;s way of organizing information, to paraphrase you, but don&#8217;t different cultures have different storytelling traditions/patterns?<br />
Thanks for your blog. Interesting.</p>
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		<title>By: Seriously</title>
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		<dc:creator>Seriously</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jul 2011 16:45:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll have to agree with LiberalPoet. The beginning, middle and end structure has always been the basics for teaching children how to write stories. It is also how I taught roommates and friends how to get easy A&#039;s on their writing assignments in college.  They key words here are children and easy. 

The truth is, this structure is easy and works because it&#039;s easy but it&#039;s a mere template. Yes you can get away with that every single time. So the question becomes... should you? It&#039;s about personal growth and wanting to do more than the basics. 

I write stories without structure and people love them (it is my understand of the basics that allow me to do this). I make documentaries with no conflict and people buy it.  The point is, we should try to take our art beyond the basics when we can.

I also don&#039;t agree that this is how the human brain is hard wired. The human brain is very capable of abstract thought (have you ever watched a video on computer programming and understood it?) Our natural instinct to find patterns does not apply here, I&#039;m sorry.  When the average viewer is watching a film, they aren&#039;t looking for or recognizing a pattern.  Only filmmakers/writers do because we tend to have a hard time becoming a &quot;viewer&quot; once we become filmmakers. The same phenomena exists for wedding professionals who have a hard time enjoying weddings as a guest after they&#039;ve become a wedding professional. They don&#039;t experience weddings the same way after that. 

What viewers do know is if they have been taken on an emotional journey or not. So now when I teach people how to write, I come for a different perspective... an emotional one with the basics (structure) in mind but not the primary method for delivery.

Anyway, it&#039;s very sad that folks can make blatantly incorrect statements about how human beings are &quot;hard wired&quot; without seeing all of the ways in which this can&#039;t possibly be true.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll have to agree with LiberalPoet. The beginning, middle and end structure has always been the basics for teaching children how to write stories. It is also how I taught roommates and friends how to get easy A&#8217;s on their writing assignments in college.  They key words here are children and easy. </p>
<p>The truth is, this structure is easy and works because it&#8217;s easy but it&#8217;s a mere template. Yes you can get away with that every single time. So the question becomes&#8230; should you? It&#8217;s about personal growth and wanting to do more than the basics. </p>
<p>I write stories without structure and people love them (it is my understand of the basics that allow me to do this). I make documentaries with no conflict and people buy it.  The point is, we should try to take our art beyond the basics when we can.</p>
<p>I also don&#8217;t agree that this is how the human brain is hard wired. The human brain is very capable of abstract thought (have you ever watched a video on computer programming and understood it?) Our natural instinct to find patterns does not apply here, I&#8217;m sorry.  When the average viewer is watching a film, they aren&#8217;t looking for or recognizing a pattern.  Only filmmakers/writers do because we tend to have a hard time becoming a &#8220;viewer&#8221; once we become filmmakers. The same phenomena exists for wedding professionals who have a hard time enjoying weddings as a guest after they&#8217;ve become a wedding professional. They don&#8217;t experience weddings the same way after that. </p>
<p>What viewers do know is if they have been taken on an emotional journey or not. So now when I teach people how to write, I come for a different perspective&#8230; an emotional one with the basics (structure) in mind but not the primary method for delivery.</p>
<p>Anyway, it&#8217;s very sad that folks can make blatantly incorrect statements about how human beings are &#8220;hard wired&#8221; without seeing all of the ways in which this can&#8217;t possibly be true.</p>
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		<title>By: Julian Camara</title>
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		<dc:creator>Julian Camara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 11:01:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m sorry, but I think your deconstruction of narratives is unclear at best. How do you delineate the act breaks with a three act structure? You say that theatre is forced to breakdown acts for stage-managerial reasons, but also claim that Pulp Fiction is not three acts? I&#039;d like to see you deconstruct Pulp Fiction&#039;s narrative. Would you conclude that there are five acts, as delineated by the title cards that show at the beginning of each act? Is that not simply film shorthand for the classic theatrical interval or scene change? With that in mind, could you not simply restructure the scenes into the correct chronological order and then breakdown the script into three acts as you have done here with Macbeth?

I just feel that in terms of screenplay analysis, you can find however many acts as you arbitrarily decide to look for, but in terms of writing a screenplay - which as you suggest yourself &quot;is so important that words cannot do this issue justice&quot; - sticking steadfastly to a basic three act structure will lead to producing scripts and stories that over simple and predictable and uninteresting. Three acts are &quot;The hero lives in a world. The world changes and the hero responds. The hero is victorious in the end&quot;. Clearly a feature film requires more plot than that. Even to add two points - &quot;The hero lives in a world. The world changes but the hero refuses to act. Someone close to the hero is directly affected by the changing world. The hero finally answers the call to arms. The hero is victorious in the end&quot; improves matters, but depending on how efficiently the story is written, and how much action is involved, can still barely fill an hour long TV slot. 

I&#039;m sure you&#039;ll conflate some of those story beats to fit it into your three act structure, but as a writer there are worlds of difference between the two breakdowns. Even as a director or an actor these are important considerations. My point is, if you have to spend as long as you do to describe the many different actions that occur within your &quot;Act II&quot; in the Crucible or Macbeth, then the writer most likely did not write that sequence of events under one heading on their whiteboard that simply said &quot;The Confrontation&quot;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m sorry, but I think your deconstruction of narratives is unclear at best. How do you delineate the act breaks with a three act structure? You say that theatre is forced to breakdown acts for stage-managerial reasons, but also claim that Pulp Fiction is not three acts? I&#8217;d like to see you deconstruct Pulp Fiction&#8217;s narrative. Would you conclude that there are five acts, as delineated by the title cards that show at the beginning of each act? Is that not simply film shorthand for the classic theatrical interval or scene change? With that in mind, could you not simply restructure the scenes into the correct chronological order and then breakdown the script into three acts as you have done here with Macbeth?</p>
<p>I just feel that in terms of screenplay analysis, you can find however many acts as you arbitrarily decide to look for, but in terms of writing a screenplay &#8211; which as you suggest yourself &#8220;is so important that words cannot do this issue justice&#8221; &#8211; sticking steadfastly to a basic three act structure will lead to producing scripts and stories that over simple and predictable and uninteresting. Three acts are &#8220;The hero lives in a world. The world changes and the hero responds. The hero is victorious in the end&#8221;. Clearly a feature film requires more plot than that. Even to add two points &#8211; &#8220;The hero lives in a world. The world changes but the hero refuses to act. Someone close to the hero is directly affected by the changing world. The hero finally answers the call to arms. The hero is victorious in the end&#8221; improves matters, but depending on how efficiently the story is written, and how much action is involved, can still barely fill an hour long TV slot. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m sure you&#8217;ll conflate some of those story beats to fit it into your three act structure, but as a writer there are worlds of difference between the two breakdowns. Even as a director or an actor these are important considerations. My point is, if you have to spend as long as you do to describe the many different actions that occur within your &#8220;Act II&#8221; in the Crucible or Macbeth, then the writer most likely did not write that sequence of events under one heading on their whiteboard that simply said &#8220;The Confrontation&#8221;.</p>
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		<title>By: videofilmmaker</title>
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		<dc:creator>videofilmmaker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Mar 2011 13:51:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree, Bobby. I remain unconvinced by the arguments against the three-act structure. Some folks see it as an &quot;art vs. Hollywood&quot; diatribe, when in fact the three-act structure has nothing to do with Hollywood and everything to do with how the human brain constructs reality.

Hollywood is fond of the three-act structure because it serves the the story well; we do not say that it works well just because Hollywood happens to like it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree, Bobby. I remain unconvinced by the arguments against the three-act structure. Some folks see it as an &#8220;art vs. Hollywood&#8221; diatribe, when in fact the three-act structure has nothing to do with Hollywood and everything to do with how the human brain constructs reality.</p>
<p>Hollywood is fond of the three-act structure because it serves the the story well; we do not say that it works well just because Hollywood happens to like it.</p>
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		<title>By: Bobby Cleaver Junior</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bobby Cleaver Junior</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Mar 2011 00:51:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>the word &quot;act&quot; has lost ALL meaning.

is it not obvious to three year old homosapiens and older that every story has THREE parts?

beginning middle end
problem exploration solution

a SPINE is just the steps and attempts  to solve the problem.  you&#039;re telling me if they try fifty things its fifty acts. which if related you could divided into how ever many sequences.  COME ON PEOPLE.   ONE STORY, THREE PARTS, BUTTLOAD OF SCENES, COWBOY SHOT AND CALL IT A WRAP</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>the word &#8220;act&#8221; has lost ALL meaning.</p>
<p>is it not obvious to three year old homosapiens and older that every story has THREE parts?</p>
<p>beginning middle end<br />
problem exploration solution</p>
<p>a SPINE is just the steps and attempts  to solve the problem.  you&#8217;re telling me if they try fifty things its fifty acts. which if related you could divided into how ever many sequences.  COME ON PEOPLE.   ONE STORY, THREE PARTS, BUTTLOAD OF SCENES, COWBOY SHOT AND CALL IT A WRAP</p>
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		<title>By: videofilmmaker</title>
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		<dc:creator>videofilmmaker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 12 Dec 2010 23:03:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>P.S. In my opinion the intermission is (or was) used to sell popcorn, just as the play subdivisions were needed to dress the set for the subsequent act. In my opinion these breaks have no bearing at all on the story&#039;s fundamental structure. They are just food / set breaks...if I&#039;m writing a three-part essay and get up to have a drink, did I just add an extra part to the text?  :-)

Thanks for the discussion...good stuff!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>P.S. In my opinion the intermission is (or was) used to sell popcorn, just as the play subdivisions were needed to dress the set for the subsequent act. In my opinion these breaks have no bearing at all on the story&#8217;s fundamental structure. They are just food / set breaks&#8230;if I&#8217;m writing a three-part essay and get up to have a drink, did I just add an extra part to the text?  <img src='http://www.lavideofilmmaker.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Thanks for the discussion&#8230;good stuff!</p>
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		<title>By: videofilmmaker</title>
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		<dc:creator>videofilmmaker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 12 Dec 2010 23:01:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One more quick point, LA writer...execs respond to and &lt;em&gt;demand&lt;/em&gt; three-act screenplays because they know that is what works, which in turn is explained by how the human brain interprets the world! They may not be consciously aware of this, but that is my hypothesis for why (a) three-act screenplays work and others usually don&#039;t, and (b) why execs therefore demand three-act screenplays and trash those that don&#039;t conform.

I certainly don&#039;t wish to pass off my cognitive-science hypothesis as a well-established model -- it is only a hypothesis -- see above. For me, however, it is exceedingly compelling and useful.

If nothing else, the three-act structure forces the writer to give serious thought to plot points and moving the story forward. I have found it a very useful construct.

Ultimately, my contention is that if you pick as many movies as you can think of, analyze those that &quot;work&quot; and those that don&#039;t, the majority of those that &quot;work&quot; will be found to have three-act structures, whereas those that do not have a three-act structure tend to be self-indulgent, amorphous and spineless (in the literary sense of the term). This is a field observation and &lt;em&gt;not&lt;/em&gt; a criticism of those who attempt five-act screenplays; it is observational rather than prescriptive. By all means push the envelope -- it is the only way to realize one&#039;s potential!

Of course we tend to forget weak movies so the second sample might be under-represented, but hopefully you see my point :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One more quick point, LA writer&#8230;execs respond to and <em>demand</em> three-act screenplays because they know that is what works, which in turn is explained by how the human brain interprets the world! They may not be consciously aware of this, but that is my hypothesis for why (a) three-act screenplays work and others usually don&#8217;t, and (b) why execs therefore demand three-act screenplays and trash those that don&#8217;t conform.</p>
<p>I certainly don&#8217;t wish to pass off my cognitive-science hypothesis as a well-established model &#8212; it is only a hypothesis &#8212; see above. For me, however, it is exceedingly compelling and useful.</p>
<p>If nothing else, the three-act structure forces the writer to give serious thought to plot points and moving the story forward. I have found it a very useful construct.</p>
<p>Ultimately, my contention is that if you pick as many movies as you can think of, analyze those that &#8220;work&#8221; and those that don&#8217;t, the majority of those that &#8220;work&#8221; will be found to have three-act structures, whereas those that do not have a three-act structure tend to be self-indulgent, amorphous and spineless (in the literary sense of the term). This is a field observation and <em>not</em> a criticism of those who attempt five-act screenplays; it is observational rather than prescriptive. By all means push the envelope &#8212; it is the only way to realize one&#8217;s potential!</p>
<p>Of course we tend to forget weak movies so the second sample might be under-represented, but hopefully you see my point <img src='http://www.lavideofilmmaker.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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